Yesterday I played on the motorbike with my cousins and his friend we did some TikTok. We also played on the trampoline and the phone we went over high and big bumps and I almost fell off.👎 My cousins also have 2 dogs called max and plonk and his friend has 3 dogs we also went down to the creek and played Marco parclo and watched spy kids and spy kids-all the time in the world! We also watched Dolittle, and click we had loads of fun :) We also went down to the creek and made bridges to ride on. :)💖
That sounds like a cool day
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DeleteHi Natalie, what wonderful sounding day playing with your cousins!
ReplyDeleteCan you please think about where you might add some full stops to your writing. I struggled to read it as you didn't let me take any breathes!
ok I will work on it :)
DeleteWhat a great way to spend an afternoon, Tik Tok is fun, last lockdown my daughter and I did one, She's the one with the know how. I love the your cousin's name for their dog, Plonk.
ReplyDeletethanks :)
DeleteHi Natalie,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading about your lockdown memories, and like Miss Moat, I also was running out of breath while reading because you didn't put fullstops at the end of your sentences.
ok! :)
ReplyDeleteOk! I will work on my fullstops thanks for the feedback guys :)
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